Writer: Meredith Rhosar (Meredith)
Editor: Judy Meiler (Judy)
Reader: Aleli Damiano (Monica)
Organizer: Meimeiryo Littlebird (Jocelyn)
Dialogue
[20:03] Meimeiryo Littlebird: lets move on to last artical
[20:03] Aleli Damiano: it seems so...
[20:03] Aleli Damiano: ok...
[20:03] Meimeiryo Littlebird: i'll be organizer
[20:03] Aleli Damiano: reader
[20:03] Meredith Rhosar: haha a very short, short one~~~XDDD
[20:05] Aleli Damiano: ok, please introduce your story to us...
[20:05] Meredith Rhosar: It's about Business Recruitment
[20:05] Meredith Rhosar: a recent event in NCU
[20:05] Meredith Rhosar: and that's what I'm now busy for~~~XD
[20:06] Meredith Rhosar: and it will come to the end next Tuseday
[20:06] Meredith Rhosar: my article is an introduction to it
[20:06] Judy Meiler: but u are happy running it!
[20:06] Meimeiryo Littlebird: u enjoyed it XD
[20:07] Meredith Rhosar: i'm one of the "30 volunteered students"
[20:07] Meredith Rhosar: yes I do!!!
[20:07] Aleli Damiano: I have a question, is there any chance for English major to find some interesting job opportunities during the event
[20:07] Susie223 Chun shouts: after being told by a friend that his father was searching him online.
[20:08] Aleli Damiano: and if it's so what kind of jobs are available?
[20:09] Meredith Rhosar: i think English professionist is essential to all the businesses
[20:09] Judy Meiler: but I think the English skill is a basic ability in all the business now.
[20:10] Meredith Rhosar: there's also foreign students joined the business employment instructions
[20:10] Meredith Rhosar: they came to listen
[20:10] Aleli Damiano: yeah, that's true but do we need to have some business background?
[20:11] Meredith Rhosar: no we don't need to
[20:11] Meredith Rhosar: if you're hired, they will train you
[20:12] Judy Meiler: So can we find a good job opportunity through it successfully?
[20:12] Aleli Damiano: oh, that's interesting!
[20:12] Meredith Rhosar: next Tuesday is the Careers Fair, maybe you can come and take a look
[20:12] Meredith Rhosar: yes I think so
[20:13] Meimeiryo Littlebird: but i think if we want to join business, we still need to have that kind of background isn't it?
[20:13] Aleli Damiano: sure..
[20:14] Judy Meiler: yeah I think so too.
[20:14] Meredith Rhosar: you'll have opportunities to do job interviews
[20:14] Meredith Rhosar: I think business background is notthe most important
[20:15] Judy Meiler: now it is really hard to find a good jub witout the background.
[20:15] Aleli Damiano: they make appointments with you or is it in the very spot...
[20:15] Meimeiryo Littlebird: i don't think any technology company would spend time to train a english major student without any experienceXDDD
[20:15] Meredith Rhosar: but maybe you have to gain some related experience and pocess some basic qualities
[20:16] Meimeiryo Littlebird: that what i mean, u cannot be totally none-experiencedXDDDD
[20:16] Judy Meiler: I think so too. I think we don't have any distinguished ability to compete with other people.
[20:16] Aleli Damiano: that's always the problem...
[20:16] Meredith Rhosar: English is important I think
[20:17] Meredith Rhosar: many people can't speak English well
[20:17] Meredith Rhosar: so that's our advantage
[20:17] Judy Meiler: but now it is so many people good at english
[20:17] Meredith Rhosar: we only need to combine it to other fields
[20:18] Judy Meiler: and many people good at second foreign language too.
[20:18] Meimeiryo Littlebird: so we can say english is true important, but now it is also essential for looking a job.
[20:18] Meredith Rhosar: well, that's true...
[20:18] Judy Meiler: so we have to gain other specific ability too.
[20:19] Meredith Rhosar: and combine with English
[20:19] Judy Meiler: yeah that's right!
[20:19] Aleli Damiano: then, I guess I should keep working on my Chinese abilities, I
[20:19] Meimeiryo Littlebird: yap, so owning only english ability is totally not enough
[20:19] Meredith Rhosar: Feminism is incredibly no use for finding a job XDDDD
[20:19] Judy Meiler: Monica, Chinese is very iportant now.
[20:19] Aleli Damiano: I wish I can be fluent in all three of them...
[20:20] Meimeiryo Littlebird: Feminism is absolutly uselessXDDDD
[20:20] Judy Meiler: u can find job also in China if u are good at Chinese.
[20:21] Meimeiryo Littlebird: like doing an interpreter or something
[20:21] Aleli Damiano: yeah, I am considering that...
[20:21] Judy Meiler: China is really a big market.
[20:22] Meredith Rhosar: interpreter is difficult!!!
[20:22] Meimeiryo Littlebird: but if u only have language specialty, that's all u can do......
[20:23] Meredith Rhosar: yeah, so we must learn something else
[20:23] Judy Meiler: yeah, so we would become miserable! Ha! Ha!
[20:24] Aleli Damiano: yes, but Ill love the challenge...I actually have work experience too...and I dont think is the only thing I can do...
[20:25] Meimeiryo Littlebird: hey~we're running out of time
[20:25] Judy Meiler: so Monica do u think master degree can make us find good job?
[20:25] Meredith Rhosar: so...any comment or suggestion?
[20:25] Meimeiryo Littlebird: make it longerXDDDD
[20:26] Meredith Rhosar: how???
[20:26] Aleli Damiano: I am not sure about taiwanese market but in my country it definitely helps a lot
[20:26] Meimeiryo Littlebird: by telling more about each event
[20:27] Meredith Rhosar: oh ok
[20:27] Meimeiryo Littlebird: or like post some activities pictures
[20:27] Aleli Damiano: yeah that's great idea!
[20:28] Meredith Rhosar: maybe can quoteour afterthoughts for preparing the whole event?
[20:28] Judy Meiler: yeah, because it is really hard to find job opportunities now, I don't know whether we sholud go out and find a job faster and better?
[20:28] Aleli Damiano: it's gonna make it very attractive!
[20:29] Meredith Rhosar: can I quote our afterthoughs for preparing for the whole event?
[20:30] Meimeiryo Littlebird: but ur goal is to introduce this event, maybe instead of post afterthoughts for preparing u should say more about the Business Recruitment itself will be better
[20:30] Meredith Rhosar: ok i see
[20:31] Judy Meiler: you can talk about what training and benefit the business would give the students in NCU.
[20:31] Meimeiryo Littlebird: or else it will become more like a 心得文XDDD
[20:32] Meredith Rhosar: but it's after you're hired...:S
[20:32] Judy Meiler: I mean the privilidge.
[20:32] Meredith Rhosar: oh ok...
[20:33] Meimeiryo Littlebird: yeah~i agree with judy~that's what reader want to know, such like what's the percentage u can get hired if u attend this eventXDDDD
[20:33] Meredith Rhosar: nn
[20:34] Aleli Damiano: or u could even mentioned about students that got really great job opportunities...
[20:34] Aleli Damiano: people that were hired....
[20:34] Meredith Rhosar: ok...
[20:35] Judy Meiler: I think u can use essential to instead of benefical.
[20:35] Meredith Rhosar: hey what's up?
[20:35] Aleli Damiano: what's up with what?
[20:35] Meredith Rhosar: but I've already used that word...
[20:36] Meredith Rhosar: i'm talking to the teacher XD
[20:36] Meimeiryo Littlebird: hahaha
Suggested Revisions:
We think Meredith's news is a very good brief introduction about Business Recruitment, but it's a little bit too short. By adding stories of students successfully got great jobs by Business Recruitment, can attract more people to read this article.
Comment:
Editor: Judy Meiler (Judy)
Reader: Aleli Damiano (Monica)
Organizer: Meimeiryo Littlebird (Jocelyn)
Dialogue
[20:03] Meimeiryo Littlebird: lets move on to last artical
[20:03] Aleli Damiano: it seems so...
[20:03] Aleli Damiano: ok...
[20:03] Meimeiryo Littlebird: i'll be organizer
[20:03] Aleli Damiano: reader
[20:03] Meredith Rhosar: haha a very short, short one~~~XDDD
[20:05] Aleli Damiano: ok, please introduce your story to us...
[20:05] Meredith Rhosar: It's about Business Recruitment
[20:05] Meredith Rhosar: a recent event in NCU
[20:05] Meredith Rhosar: and that's what I'm now busy for~~~XD
[20:06] Meredith Rhosar: and it will come to the end next Tuseday
[20:06] Meredith Rhosar: my article is an introduction to it
[20:06] Judy Meiler: but u are happy running it!
[20:06] Meimeiryo Littlebird: u enjoyed it XD
[20:07] Meredith Rhosar: i'm one of the "30 volunteered students"
[20:07] Meredith Rhosar: yes I do!!!
[20:07] Aleli Damiano: I have a question, is there any chance for English major to find some interesting job opportunities during the event
[20:07] Susie223 Chun shouts: after being told by a friend that his father was searching him online.
[20:08] Aleli Damiano: and if it's so what kind of jobs are available?
[20:09] Meredith Rhosar: i think English professionist is essential to all the businesses
[20:09] Judy Meiler: but I think the English skill is a basic ability in all the business now.
[20:10] Meredith Rhosar: there's also foreign students joined the business employment instructions
[20:10] Meredith Rhosar: they came to listen
[20:10] Aleli Damiano: yeah, that's true but do we need to have some business background?
[20:11] Meredith Rhosar: no we don't need to
[20:11] Meredith Rhosar: if you're hired, they will train you
[20:12] Judy Meiler: So can we find a good job opportunity through it successfully?
[20:12] Aleli Damiano: oh, that's interesting!
[20:12] Meredith Rhosar: next Tuesday is the Careers Fair, maybe you can come and take a look
[20:12] Meredith Rhosar: yes I think so
[20:13] Meimeiryo Littlebird: but i think if we want to join business, we still need to have that kind of background isn't it?
[20:13] Aleli Damiano: sure..
[20:14] Judy Meiler: yeah I think so too.
[20:14] Meredith Rhosar: you'll have opportunities to do job interviews
[20:14] Meredith Rhosar: I think business background is notthe most important
[20:15] Judy Meiler: now it is really hard to find a good jub witout the background.
[20:15] Aleli Damiano: they make appointments with you or is it in the very spot...
[20:15] Meimeiryo Littlebird: i don't think any technology company would spend time to train a english major student without any experienceXDDD
[20:15] Meredith Rhosar: but maybe you have to gain some related experience and pocess some basic qualities
[20:16] Meimeiryo Littlebird: that what i mean, u cannot be totally none-experiencedXDDDD
[20:16] Judy Meiler: I think so too. I think we don't have any distinguished ability to compete with other people.
[20:16] Aleli Damiano: that's always the problem...
[20:16] Meredith Rhosar: English is important I think
[20:17] Meredith Rhosar: many people can't speak English well
[20:17] Meredith Rhosar: so that's our advantage
[20:17] Judy Meiler: but now it is so many people good at english
[20:17] Meredith Rhosar: we only need to combine it to other fields
[20:18] Judy Meiler: and many people good at second foreign language too.
[20:18] Meimeiryo Littlebird: so we can say english is true important, but now it is also essential for looking a job.
[20:18] Meredith Rhosar: well, that's true...
[20:18] Judy Meiler: so we have to gain other specific ability too.
[20:19] Meredith Rhosar: and combine with English
[20:19] Judy Meiler: yeah that's right!
[20:19] Aleli Damiano: then, I guess I should keep working on my Chinese abilities, I
[20:19] Meimeiryo Littlebird: yap, so owning only english ability is totally not enough
[20:19] Meredith Rhosar: Feminism is incredibly no use for finding a job XDDDD
[20:19] Judy Meiler: Monica, Chinese is very iportant now.
[20:19] Aleli Damiano: I wish I can be fluent in all three of them...
[20:20] Meimeiryo Littlebird: Feminism is absolutly uselessXDDDD
[20:20] Judy Meiler: u can find job also in China if u are good at Chinese.
[20:21] Meimeiryo Littlebird: like doing an interpreter or something
[20:21] Aleli Damiano: yeah, I am considering that...
[20:21] Judy Meiler: China is really a big market.
[20:22] Meredith Rhosar: interpreter is difficult!!!
[20:22] Meimeiryo Littlebird: but if u only have language specialty, that's all u can do......
[20:23] Meredith Rhosar: yeah, so we must learn something else
[20:23] Judy Meiler: yeah, so we would become miserable! Ha! Ha!
[20:24] Aleli Damiano: yes, but Ill love the challenge...I actually have work experience too...and I dont think is the only thing I can do...
[20:25] Meimeiryo Littlebird: hey~we're running out of time
[20:25] Judy Meiler: so Monica do u think master degree can make us find good job?
[20:25] Meredith Rhosar: so...any comment or suggestion?
[20:25] Meimeiryo Littlebird: make it longerXDDDD
[20:26] Meredith Rhosar: how???
[20:26] Aleli Damiano: I am not sure about taiwanese market but in my country it definitely helps a lot
[20:26] Meimeiryo Littlebird: by telling more about each event
[20:27] Meredith Rhosar: oh ok
[20:27] Meimeiryo Littlebird: or like post some activities pictures
[20:27] Aleli Damiano: yeah that's great idea!
[20:28] Meredith Rhosar: maybe can quoteour afterthoughts for preparing the whole event?
[20:28] Judy Meiler: yeah, because it is really hard to find job opportunities now, I don't know whether we sholud go out and find a job faster and better?
[20:28] Aleli Damiano: it's gonna make it very attractive!
[20:29] Meredith Rhosar: can I quote our afterthoughs for preparing for the whole event?
[20:30] Meimeiryo Littlebird: but ur goal is to introduce this event, maybe instead of post afterthoughts for preparing u should say more about the Business Recruitment itself will be better
[20:30] Meredith Rhosar: ok i see
[20:31] Judy Meiler: you can talk about what training and benefit the business would give the students in NCU.
[20:31] Meimeiryo Littlebird: or else it will become more like a 心得文XDDD
[20:32] Meredith Rhosar: but it's after you're hired...:S
[20:32] Judy Meiler: I mean the privilidge.
[20:32] Meredith Rhosar: oh ok...
[20:33] Meimeiryo Littlebird: yeah~i agree with judy~that's what reader want to know, such like what's the percentage u can get hired if u attend this eventXDDDD
[20:33] Meredith Rhosar: nn
[20:34] Aleli Damiano: or u could even mentioned about students that got really great job opportunities...
[20:34] Aleli Damiano: people that were hired....
[20:34] Meredith Rhosar: ok...
[20:35] Judy Meiler: I think u can use essential to instead of benefical.
[20:35] Meredith Rhosar: hey what's up?
[20:35] Aleli Damiano: what's up with what?
[20:35] Meredith Rhosar: but I've already used that word...
[20:36] Meredith Rhosar: i'm talking to the teacher XD
[20:36] Meimeiryo Littlebird: hahaha
Suggested Revisions:
We think Meredith's news is a very good brief introduction about Business Recruitment, but it's a little bit too short. By adding stories of students successfully got great jobs by Business Recruitment, can attract more people to read this article.
Comment:
I think Meredith had a great time by joining Business Recruitment. Reading her article, would make me want to know more about it. So I think she can add some more details to each event under Business Recruitment, and add some activities photos. Meredith was asking if she should add some reflections about preparing Business Recruitment, but I suggested that would be a little awkward for her article. After all, she want to write an introductory news, not an experience expression.
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